unresponsive
jakson deyne
Hello my name is Jakson Deyne and right now i am in a coma unfortunately. it all happened so suddenly and this, what im about to tell you is the story of how i got into a coma... after i have told you the story of how it happened ill bring you up to date.
It was a fairly normal day although this day seemed very nice, the sun was out and there was a soft gentle breeze and I Jakson was outside just enjoying the day at the park. i didn't have any friends but that didn't bother me i was happy just the way everything was and i could not ask for a better day at that very moment but what happened next made me think far different about how I always took everything for granted
Okay so there was a very nice breeze and just as I was walking out of the park onto the road I heard the engine of a car... I looked to the left and there was a car speeding as a car was speeding way to fast and it was as if time slowed down and froze.
The next thing I knew was everything was all black and I could not see anything at all. all I could hear was a small 'bleep......bleep.......bleep......bleep.......bleep
all I could do was think. I was counting the seconds and then i heard a door open and a soft gentle voice "JAKSON!" It was my mother
I really wanted to just cry but had no emotions or no movement, all i wanted to do was just stand up and hug her. I heard a woman who I guessed was the nurse say " he was hit by a car that later sped of without any witnesses to the licence plate" she was so sad and i just wanted to speak to her i was crying inside and just wanted to feel the warmth of her embrace. i wanted to know that she was okay.
several days had passed and well it could be weeks or months, i didn't know. My parents visited every day and although I didn't know the time i did know whenever my parents were going to come. they were here for about two to three hours I thought..
it is like a normal day and i am waiting for my parents to come in and they just have arrived and are having a conversation with the nurse "im really sorry but i do not think that your son is going to wake up... maybe we should consider- pulling the plug" noooooo i just want to scream i am here and i WILL wake up
my mum starts to cry as i just try and move, its hopeless
"okay" says my mum................ NOOOOOO dont do it there going to do it. i hear footsteps going toward the machine as my mum cries an-

