The Long Night

By: Kingi Vang

Mystery man's point of view: I was invited to dinner at a mansion, the letter arrived at my doorstep. It was when I was out having a fantastic time with my dog, Cloud. We had to flee because of a devastating storm that was appearing. As we ran we heard thunder in the distance, crashing lightning bolts. It started pouring raining, I crash into my house soak and wet,“Cloud, we need to dry off!" So we changed into our PJ's, felt drowsy and my bed, so soft like silk and lulled me to sleep. Cloud woke me up with a bark, I forgot all about the invitation. But cloud woke me up early it was still dark but the rain is pouring. I got ready, put on my suit and tie, classic suit black, white, and red. So I got my candle, lit it, got an umbrella, got Cloud and went into the darkness. Crash went the lightning scared the living daylights out of me so I dropped my candle in fright. Lucky cloud was there to help me get the candle-it was just under the umbrella-so I can relight it. I finally go to the door,Knock Knock, I went. A girl opened the door, I don't recognized the beautiful face of the mysterious girl,“Hello, my name is Madison", she said. Just her voice makes my day,“Hello", I reply in a slight voice. I come in, “thump!" I trip, I pick myself up. I see a man, stretched his arm out to help me up, he shakes my hand,“Yoshi, my name's Yoshi". I shake his hand,“cold" I say in my mind. Thunder strikes again but now it sounds like biting a cracker and eating it.“Hello ye guests!" Yelled the host,“Welcome to my Mansion, we will begin in the dining room." We all washed our hands and sat down around the beautifully set table, waiting for my food I talked to Madison,"Good day,my lady?" "Not really a delightful day but was good." She replied ," I can see you have a dog" she said ,"yes, his name is Cloud". We waited more than an hour and still haven't got our food, a man stood up, he had a flaming face and tried to open the door, but it wont open! He panicked and started to kick the door till' we saw a figure shadow appearing from the ground, lightning flashed, the light blinkered out. We heard the man scream, Madison grabbed my hand, her hand was warm. The light flickered back on a while later and all we saw was blood on the floor right next to the door, cloud was smelling it, it was splattered around that area, so thick. She holds my hand tightly, I bring her with me to the door, nothing was there, just the blood. Madison looked into my eyes, and I felt that she was terrified and needed me to be by her side. I told the people," listen up, we have a choice, do we want to wait and die from that... "Thing", or are we going to try and get out of here?" Yoshi was the only one to follow me and Madison so I acted smart. I told Yoshi to pull the books or anything. Madison sat against the wall, I heard a hollow spot somewhere near the wall when Madison sat against it, I told Madison and Yoshi to start knocking on the wall. I knocked the wall next to the blood stain and there was the hollow spot. A tunnel leading to somewhere, that somewhere is far. Later on in the tunnel, "A rusty door awaits us" a sound of a little girl whispered,"was that you Madison?" "No, I hear nothing." Just as the voice said, we arrived at a rusty door. Creek.., the door opens slightly,"come on", the same voice, I think to myself. We arrived in a hallway, Madison went to a window to look out side,Crash! Went the lightning, the volt struck the tree and was ignited. "AHHH, a fire!!!" She ran away, I couldn't see where she was going but I ran after her. No way the love of my life is going to die I thought to myself, Yoshi went along and helped out.  While running, this one wooden door we heard a strange cry, sounded like a child. I slowly opened the door, creek... The terrible cries came closer, I was in fright mode and Slammed the door shut."what's wrong?" Yoshi asked surprisedly. "There... There... Is a little girl...crying" I say as I tremble in fright. Yoshi, still curious, appearing in front of the door, and opened it. One of the children somehow got into this room."my name is yui, can you help me?" She said to Yoshi in a convincing voice." Yoshi looked me in the eye, I knew the look in his eyes,"She can come"I say."I need to get to my brother, his name is Chee Meng". The lights burn out, groping through the darkness I felt a chill throughout my body."A ghosts awaits us", I say this in a calm voice."A...a ghost?" Yui said while she was panicking. As I say my words,"yes", only I can hear the voice,"Deepest the soul, thou shall not be found, but withist shall be a burning heart". As I hear the last of the words, the lights go on,FLASH! Now there was writing on the wall,"If ye pass, shall face fear, if ye not die". This mansion is worse than I thought, Cloud, still waiting outside the door. I think, what shall I do."uh... What's your name Mr.?" She said in a cheery voice, so delightful to hear."Classified, which means..." I say till' I get interrupted, "yeah yeah yeah, basically means I can't tell you." She says sarcastically. Yoshi kicked the door, Yui screamed,"AHHHH!!!" "Yoshi, stop" I say, but he kicks it over and over."One last kick", a round house kick, finally the door opening. A creaking noise comes,"shhh" I say in a scared, tight end voice."This way", she was sure where to go,"I've been in here for a long time, maybe I can find your "friend". The creeks went into the room,"OK we are safe, for now". I look down the hallway, so deep, so dark. We walk through slowly, I see a person,"hey!" I say in a slight loud whisper. When we came, there was a corps, he was brutally stabbed to death."Ewwww" she sound like she was about to throw up. Maggots already got into his system,"must have been here for more than a day"."Look", we all looked at what Yui was pointing at,"footprints, but weird footprints, bloody"."Its Madison's!" I rush through the hallway,"Madison!...Madison!..." My jaw drops,"Hey wait... up" he yelled, but we all now saw, we stared deeply into a hallway. Blood, bodies, skeletons, everywhere,"Yui, where's Yui?!" I yell. "Ya...ya,yes?" She said almost in a crying/scared voice."Stay..."I say,"AHHHHH!!!" We hear, a screaming voice that sounds like Madison. "Madison, I'm coming!!!" I ran as fast as I could, stood right in front of the rusty door and slammed into it and saw her. She ran to me and hugged me,"I miss you so much." My heart warms up,"why did you run away?" I say. "I saw a figure, it reflected on the window and I ran screaming, so I couldn't hear you." "Is she your girlfriend Mr.?" Yui said."who is this curious fellow?" Asked Madison,"my apologize, this is Yui, and Yui, meet Madison." Yui whispered in my ear,"she's pretty". I blushed and stared at the floor with a thought,"I never felt this way before" I say to myself. Yui tugged my tie,"Mr. The monster is coming..." I closed the door, the sound of chains moving, the loud steps coming to the door, then stops. The door slowly opening, we all panic."THUD THUD THUD!!!" Upstairs had the noise of something running, the "monster" ran toward the noise and suddenly disappeared."I'm starting to feel tired" said Yui,"we will stay here to rest" I say. So we put our heads down and went to sleep... I woke up, had a headache, I couldn't see anything, just darkness. The moon light still shining,"Its not morning,still night." I tried to grab a match or something I can light the candle with. I touched something like coal on a tip, so I slid it on the flood, and lit the candle. I didn't see Yui anywhere is the room after I lit the candle. I woke up yoshi,"I don't see Yui, have you seen her?" Yoshi puzzled,"no I haven't" he said. I went out of the room looking, I go up stairs hoping to at least have a clue where Yui went. As I walk forward I see somebody, I ran,"hey have you seen...", I stopped. The person was ripped apart, blood all over ,"still warm", I think it happened yesterday because of the "monster" but maybe a couple of minutes ago. I am thinking, thinking so hard when yui tapped me I was startled,"There is a blood trail leading to a door, I told Yoshi to stay and I would go alone. I approach the door, ready for some creepy things. I open the door, I see three people hanging from the ceiling, the dripping blood. A puddle of blood formed from that drop from the 2nd person. I hear a moaning noise near by, I slow approach the room, step by step I hear creeks. Creeks that are quite, but loud enough to get me caught. I hear louder moans, it gets louder, every time I take a stepMystery man's point of view:I was invited to dinner at a mansion, the letter arrived at my doorstep. It was when I was out having a fantastic time with my dog, Cloud. We had to flee because of a devastating storm that was appearing. As we ran we heard thunder in the distance, crashing lightning bolts. It started pouring raining, I  crash into my house soak and wet,“Cloud, we need to dry off!" So we changed into our PJ's, felt drowsy and my bed, so soft like silk and lulled me to sleep. Cloud woke me up with a bark, I forgot all about the invitation. But cloud woke me up early it was still dark but the rain is pouring. I got ready, put on my suit and tie, classic suit black, white, and red. So I got my candle, lit it, got an umbrella, got Cloud and went into the darkness. Crash went the lightning scared the living daylights out of me so I dropped my candle in fright. Lucky cloud was there to help me get the candle-it was just under the umbrella-so I can relight it. I finally go to the door,Knock Knock, I went. A girl opened the door, I don't recognized the beautiful face of the mysterious girl,“Hello, my name is Madison", she said. Just her voice makes my day,“Hello", I reply in a slight voice. I come in, “thump!" I trip, I pick myself up. I see a man, stretched his arm out to help me up, he shakes my hand,“Yoshi, my name's Yoshi". I shake his hand,“cold" I say in my mind. Thunder strikes again but now it sounds like biting a cracker and eating it.“Hello ye guests!" Yelled the host,“Welcome to my Mansion, we will begin in the dining room." We all washed our hands and sat down around the beautifully set table, waiting for my food I talked to Madison,"Good day,my lady?" "Not really a delightful day but was good." She replied ," I can see you have a dog" she said ,"yes, his name is Cloud". We waited more than an hour and still haven't got our food, a man stood up, he had a flaming face and tried to open the door, but it wont open! He panicked and started to kick the door till' we saw a figure shadow appearing from the ground, lightning flashed, the light blinkered out. We heard the man scream, Madison grabbed my hand, her hand was warm. The light flickered back on a while later and all we saw was blood on the floor right next to the door, cloud was smelling it, it was splattered around that area, so thick. She holds my hand tightly, I bring her with me to the door, nothing was there, just the blood. Madison looked into my eyes, and I felt that she was terrified and needed me to be by her side. I told the people," listen up, we have a choice, do we want to wait and die from that... "Thing", or are we going to try and get out of here?" Yoshi was the only one to follow me and Madison so I acted smart. I told Yoshi to pull the books or anything. Madison sat against the wall, I heard a hollow spot somewhere near the wall when Madison sat against it, I told Madison and Yoshi to start knocking on the wall. I knocked the wall next to the blood stain and there was the hollow spot. A tunnel leading to somewhere, that somewhere is far. Later on in the tunnel, "A rusty door awaits us" a sound of a little girl whispered,"was that you Madison?" "No, I hear nothing." Just as the voice said, we arrived at a rusty door. Creek.., the door opens slightly,"come on", the same voice, I think to myself. We arrived in a hallway, Madison went to a window to look out side,Crash! Went the lightning, the volt struck the tree and was ignited. "AHHH, a fire!!!" She ran away, I couldn't see where she was going but I ran after her. No way the love of my life is going to die I thought to myself, Yoshi went along and helped out.  While running, this one wooden door we heard a strange cry, sounded like a child. I slowly opened the door, creek... The terrible cries came closer, I was in fright mode and Slammed the door shut."what's wrong?" Yoshi asked surprisedly. "There... There... Is a little girl...crying" I say as I tremble in fright. Yoshi, still curious, appearing in front of the door, and opened it. One of the children somehow got into this room."my name is yui, can you help me?" She said to Yoshi in a convincing voice." Yoshi looked me in the eye, I knew the look in his eyes,"She can come"I say."I need to get to my brother, his name is Chee Meng". The lights burn out, groping through the darkness I felt a chill throughout my body."A ghosts awaits us", I say this in a calm voice."A...a ghost?" Yui said while she was panicking. As I say my words,"yes", only I can hear the voice,"Deepest the soul, thou shall not be found, but withist shall be a burning heart". As I hear the last of the words, the lights go on,FLASH! Now there was writing on the wall,"If ye pass, shall face fear, if ye not die". This mansion is worse than I thought, Cloud, still waiting outside the door. I think, what shall I do."uh... What's your name Mr.?" She said in a cheery voice, so delightful to hear."Classified, which means..." I say till' I get interrupted, "yeah yeah yeah, basically means I can't tell you." She says sarcastically. Yoshi kicked the door, Yui screamed,"AHHHH!!!" "Yoshi, stop" I say, but he kicks it over and over."One last kick", a round house kick, finally the door opening. A creaking noise comes,"shhh" I say in a scared, tight end voice."This way", she was sure where to go,"I've been in here for a long time, maybe I can find your "friend". The creeks went into the room,"OK we are safe, for now". I look down the hallway, so deep, so dark. We walk through slowly, I see a person,"hey!" I say in a slight loud whisper. When we came, there was a corps, he was brutally stabbed to death."Ewwww" she sound like she was about to throw up. Maggots already got into his system,"must have been here for more than a day"."Look", we all looked at what Yui was pointing at,"footprints, but weird footprints, bloody"."Its Madison's!" I rush through the hallway,"Madison!...Madison!..." My jaw drops,"Hey wait... up" he yelled, but we all now saw, we stared deeply into a hallway. Blood, bodies, skeletons, everywhere,"Yui, where's Yui?!" I yell. "Ya...ya,yes?" She said almost in a crying/scared voice."Stay..."I say,"AHHHHH!!!" We hear, a screaming voice that sounds like Madison. "Madison, I'm coming!!!" I ran as fast as I could, stood right in front of the rusty door and slammed into it and saw her. She ran to me and hugged me,"I miss you so much." My heart warms up,"why did you run away?" I say. "I saw a figure, it reflected on the window and I ran screaming, so I couldn't hear you." "Is she your girlfriend Mr.?" Yui said."who is this curious fellow?" Asked Madison,"my apologize, this is Yui, and Yui, meet Madison." Yui whispered in my ear,"she's pretty". I blushed and stared at the floor with a thought,"I never felt this way before" I say to myself. Yui tugged my tie,"Mr. The monster is coming..." I closed the door, the sound of chains moving, the loud steps coming to the door, then stops. The door slowly opening, we all panic."THUD THUD THUD!!!" Upstairs had the noise of something running, the "monster" ran toward the noise and suddenly disappeared."I'm starting to feel tired" said Yui,"we will stay here to rest" I say. So we put our heads down and went to sleep... I woke up, had a headache, I couldn't see anything, just darkness. The moon light still shining,"Its not morning,still night." I tried to grab a match or something I can light the candle with. I touched something like coal on a tip, so I slid it on the flood, and lit the candle. I didn't see Yui anywhere is the room after I lit the candle. I woke up yoshi,"I don't see Yui, have you seen her?" Yoshi puzzled,"no I haven't" he said. I went out of the room looking, I go up stairs hoping to at least have a clue where Yui went. As I walk forward I see somebody, I ran,"hey have you seen...", I stopped. The person was ripped apart, blood all over ,"still warm", I think it happened yesterday because of the "monster" but maybe a couple of minutes ago. I am thinking, thinking so hard when yui tapped me I was startled,"There is a blood trail leading to a door, I told Yoshi to stay and I would go alone. I approach the door, ready for some creepy things. I open the door, I see three people hanging from the ceiling, the dripping blood. A puddle of blood formed from that drop from the 2nd person. I hear a moaning noise near by, I approach the room, step by step, louder than ever, I shiver from fright."Hey, calm down" Yoshi says trying to encourage me. Moans...Moans... More and more, louder and louder. I get to the bodies, it smells like odor. I look around, there is a door to the right of me,"its fine" i say. Yoshi, Yui, and Madison come in,"ewwwwww, it smells"Yui says walking closer.